Manga Page Test-OotSP

Just practicing drawing Manga pages on a little scene from Out of the Silent Planet. I've recently looked at this super helpful tutorial ([link]) on drawing Manga pages, and realized that my main problem is that I'm always trying to draw too small. So I decided to do a few test pages to practice for when I publish a manga of my own someday. ^_^

Featuring Ransom and one of the inhabitants of Malacandra. *gasp!* Who or what could it be?